Name: Sora Mustang
Age: 15 (Ed's 16 and Al's 14)
Height: 5'1" (me: Ed's 5'3")
Weight: 90lbs
Hair: Greyish-white
Eye: Fading purple
Clothing: You wear only black, you'll find out why in the story.
State Alchemist Alias: The Shadow Alchemist. You are called that because you can use alchemy on shadows. Say you wanted to make a sword. You can use a shadow to create one. Another reason why is because you can appear and reappear like a shadow.
Ranking: Lt. Colonel
Family: Roy Mustang is your brother.
Pets: You have a grey wolf named Darkness, but you call him dark for short. He is a really big wolf. He's so big that you can sit on his back to ride.
Extras: You have a birthmark on your left arm shoulder. You don't know what it means exactly but your willing to find out. You have dark purple beads in your hair and you where a cool large rubber-band to hold your hair.
Backround:
You used to have a family. You had your mom, dad, and Roy. When you were 7 your parents were killed. You and Roy ran away and were taken in by another family. Soon when you were 10, Roy bought a house and you moved in. You and Roy soon had a fight and you ran away into the forest. You soon met Darkness and has protected you ever since you saved him from a hunters trap. When you were 12 Roy found you and you and Darkness moved back in. Soon you learned about Human Transmutation on your mom and dad, but in the end you lost your left arm and right leg (me: I ran out of ideas!) When you were 13 you became a State Alchemist and gained the name 'The Shadow Alchemist'. Ever since you ran away from Roy you never spoke. You never spoke because you barely had anyone in the world. Some people still have mysteries on why you never speak. The only words that you usually say are 'leave me alone' or 'go away'. The only people that you talk to are Darkness and Roy (me: sooner or later Ed and Al will be able to talk to you ^_~) You never go anywhere without Darkness. You only wear black because you think that's the only color that decribes you, after all you are the 'Shadow Alchemsit'. You like to go out on strolls at night and walk around and talk to Darkness telepathicly.
~~~QUIZ START~~~
You woke up one morning and the phone started to ring. You picked up the phone and answer in a quiet whisper voice," Hello? This is The Shadow Alchemist..." "Sora?" "Roy is that you?" you replied still half asleep. "Yes it is, Sora I need you to come to my office I need you too meet someone." "Yes sir." You hung up the phone and started to change. You changed into a black shirt with no sleeves, revealing your auto-mail left arm, basically like Eds but skin tight. You wear wearing a black mini-skirt revealing your auto-mail right leg and skin tight black boots. You put your hair in the same design you always put it in. Darkness was finished with his food and nudged your hand. You looked down and had an emotionless face on, but we're communicating telepathicaly. You finally left your dorm room and went to Roy's office. You opened the doors to see a boy with blonde hair tied into a ponytail, wearing a red coat, black clothes, and white gloves. He had soft golden eyes and peach like skin. Standing next to him was another boy (me: I'm deciding to my Alphonse in human form in this story, but Ed still had his auto-mail. ^^) The other boy had light brown hair and a little taller than the blonde boy. He was wearing a white shirt and the same coat as the blonde boy, but it was grey and the crest sign was black. You glanced over at the boys and they glanced at you. You suddenly hear growling. You looked down to see Darkness growling at them. You gestured your hand and Darkness still growled. "Boy come here." said Roy in a strict manner. Dark walked over to Roy and wagged his tail. You glanced over at Darkness. ~Be nice~ you telepathically said. ~I won't bite his hand...~ They Roy started petting Darks head. "Shadow I want you to meet FullMetal points to blonde boy. Shadow, FullMetal. FullMetal, Shadow." "Hi, I'm Edward Elric, and what's your name?" He reached his hand out to you. You took his hand and shook it then bowed. You still had an emotionless face on. "Oh, sorry FullMetal, Shadow doesn't like to talk much. Her name is Sora Mustang, shes my baby sister..." You turned your head break-neck speed and glared at Roy, he had an anime sweatdrop. "I mean... she my sister... Well anyway you to will be accompanying each other in order to find the Philosophers Stone." "WHAT! I DON'T NEED A PARTNER!" yells Ed completely disagreeing. "Oh yes you do, Sora here is a Lt. Colonel, a way higher rank than you, also she is my sister and I know what she's capable of. She will accompany you." Ed glared at him and gave in. You looked over at Dark. He walked over to you. ~Is there something wrong Sora-chan?~ ~No, come on, we'll let Roy explain the rest to the boys.~ Dark nodded his head a little. You walked over to Roy and whipered something in his ear, only loud enough for him to hear. "Roy, give FullMetal my profile and give me his, I want to know more about him and I'm sure he does too." Roy nodded and gave you a file. You saluted and walked away with Darkness following behind you.
{Roy's POV}
Once you saw Sora walk out of the room, you took out her profile. "Hey, what's that Colonel" "Well, this is Sora's profile, she wanted me to give it to you so that you can know more about her." You were about to give it to FullMetal, until you pulled it away. "FullMetal, I trust you and Al will keep this a secret, this is her REAL profile. I gave her YOUR REAL profile too, she said that she wanted to know more about you too, but don't let ANYONE see it, only you and Al." You handed him the folder, before they walked out of the room you said," And FullMetal, I want you to protect Sora...she's my only family." Ed nodded and left the room. I wonder what I'm doing is right. I think Sora needs a boyfriend for once, she's been quiet for too long, I miss the old Sora. She used to be so happy and carefree, now she seems all quiet and mischevious. I worry about her. I think she needs love from someone else that she can love back... You thought to yourself and get up from your chair. You looked out your window and looked down to see Sora under a Sakura tree with Darkness's head on her lap and Sora petting him as she read FullMetal's profile. You sighed and went back onto the paper work, when suddenly....
go to quizzila.com/users/FMAfangurl10310/quizzes/ for the rest!!
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__hmmmmmmmmm... i like the writing technique, it really makes the reader like theyare part of the story. Great introduction to a Book or sereies of short stories. It is not right girly and ovey dovey bt i can see some romance maybe setting itself up, and then some really cool action sequences, and very intriguing mystery comes into play. It really makes the reader wonder what is gong to happen to Sora and will she ever open up and let go of the dark side her personality. Very good choice of words and i love the detail in the story, your description really made me see the character as i was reading and get a feeling for the character I love the set up it is almost like it could be a play or even a comicbook draft. very excellent work here! (i will probably read more) BTW did you write it BlueRose Alchemist because if you did be proud of yourself.
Really liked the tory. I'm alo doing one on my own maybe I should post it also...
yeah that would be cool more neat stories. i love this writing technique, because personally i have neve written anything with that style before and always wondered how it was done but i am trying to put this technique to use in some of my writings.
Moon Alchemist- please do it ould make this so much more interesting and believe if anyone i will take time to read it.
ok maybe I will
when i first started to read i already wanted to know what was ganna happen next i love the way you descibed the person at the beginning then had the story knowing and imagining what the charactor looks like.this is so well written iwant to find the rest of this story now ^_^
opps i cant get in srry i really want to read the rest though
<:( it is just going to eat at me till i dont remember no more and that will be imposible.
I liked the story sooo much and the description was so clear that I couldraw The Shadow Alchemist with no problem. Please post the rest of the story, I nt find the web page where the rest of the story is.
I liked the story sooo much and the description was so clear that I couldraw The Shadow Alchemist with no problem. Please post the rest of the story, I nt find the web page where the rest of the story is.
www.quizzila.com/users/FMAfangurl10310/stuff/
if i post the rest it'll take up ALOT of room
yes its me im on mah friends computer i AM Blue Rose
Ok there is that in my computer appears that that page dosn't exist.
http://www.quizilla.com/users/FMAfangurl10310/stuff
i think its this one right? its the same story.i read it its good
Thanks. Blue Rose you're awesome!!! You definetly have the gift of writting. Maybe yo should try making a manga.I will be the first one to buy it. YOU'RE GREAT!!!!
Blue Rose if I got an acooununt on quizzila , can I delete it when I want??
im not Blue Rose
but i think you
can delete it
whenever idk
not sure
I've got a fanfiction account, does anyone else have one?
no but how do you get one i would like to do something like that but maybe not all Fma stuff, i feel that i would mess the story of Fma up too much and i would not want to soil the FMA name and story the creator of it did so well and i feel i cannot do what she did so i probably would not have too many FMA fan fictions lol
BORING. I got bored with reading the first three sentances of it. Whoever that BlueRose chick is, shes obviously a complete moron... It was WAY... too fanatic written. I didn't like it
thats nice. if you didnt like it you could have rolled your eyes and clicked else where, there was no reason for you to reply with an asshole comment. God..
I second that. I really dont like yaoi fanfics. They normally end up with Ed and Roy doing... shudders
i think Sora's a girl o.o
I hate yaoi too! BAd Bri! Do I need to bring out the Brokeback mountain videos????
i repeat. I. THINK. SORA'S. A. GIRL.
>.> Looks around Yaoi fangirl, over here... Please don't shoot! I didn't mean for it to happen! But, I like Ed/Hei, not RoyEd. But don't worry, I'm not rabid and won't force any of my ships on you.
runs from angry fangirls
Ed/Hei? Whats that?
Ed and Alphons Heiderich. :3
How are you supposed to know Sora's a girl?
(this is guardian angel)
um. i do not know. i always thought Sora was a girl o.o
>.> i like Ed x Hei alittle too. and kinda TINY BIT! of Ed x Envy and Ed x Roy. i apologize, i do not know how it happened D=
No need to apologize~!
I though Sora was a girl's name, too.
HA! in the story Roy introduces you as his baby SISTER!
that means the story's not yaoi! HA! :D
...account has two C's doesn't it?...-.-
Yep.
lol of course account has 2 c's in it or you would have typed it wrong lol
it's not there :(
DUDE!!!! THAT'S MY NAME!!! I'VE BEEN HERE FOR A YEAR TOO!!!!
dude, i be the shadow alchemist. but blue rose made a way cool story out of it. i just thought it was a cool name, whatever
Hey,
Ayuhio!
ANKU'S BACK crazy dance