intro...(basicly the location of moogle story)
in a different world from our own, humans aren't the only one's who can creat cities and goverments. in the world of Leahly, to races fight for domination. humans and ganmalies. ganmalies are much like humans, they can do everything and look excaclty like humans, but have one difference, they have ears of animals. be it dog, cat, snake, bird, rabbit, ganmalies have different ears from humans(sometimes there hair and skin is different to). there is one other thing that makes Leahly different from our world, Leahly has a special stone called an sir stone. these air stones have the ability to float, and even propel other objects into the air, if used corectly. b/c of this ability, air stones are very rare and have long ago been over mined. though even still, ppl are able to make airships with them.
(ok ppl, how is moogle doing? yes moogle knows that there is no plot, or charecters yet, but to understand the story, there is sooooo much to explaine..... next time moogle shall introduce the main charecter!)
ok, go on! I want to read more!
ch.1
"wait u mongral! u can't run forever!! soemone will get u and u can...huff huff bet u'r dirty money huff huff weeve its going to be me! huff huff"
a small, and cute ganmalie ran down the side ally, antice fase in one hand, and a sword on her other side. the ganmalie had black hair, and black eyes. she wore a pink sleevles shirt (much like winries but made out of scrunchy matirial) that was long enough to cover her very short white bicycle pants. Her arms were coverd buy seperat white sleeves that flared out into many layers at her hands. on her legs, pinks and white striped leg wormers that fell onto her stileto black boots. a white pick of fabric that ran over her right shoulder and onto her left wast was holding onto her katana. the man persuing her gave up after she leaped the fence that seperated to allies. she waved and smiled behind her while running as the man stoped and continued to yell angry remarks at her.
*ancticent vase in one hand
*huff huff weeze
(sorry for all the type-o's >_<)
ah moogle vot an imsprashun u r
good!
well if no one is going to coment, then moogle shall keep writing!
ch.2
the ganmalie slowed to a stroll and wandered into a loud night club. a live ganmalie band was playing and the place was packed with mostly other ganmalie. she tried to covered her black doglike ears(like inu-yashas) and went to the bar. a brown human bartender greeted her,"hey Hersha! steal anything good this time? is it enough to pay of u'r tab? cause u know, it is starting to get hefty."
"i don't know yet, i have to sell if first to get some money remember Mike!? as a bartender and an owner, i would think u new were money came from by now" hersha said teasingly. they both chuckeled and mike gave her a drink.
"so... how much are u going to be worth now that u stole this vase?" mike asked.
" i told u i don't know how much its worth, but i'm guessing around $500. well, i'm hoping. and the bounty that the government has put on my head, well, last time i checked it was arouned 10 million. but u know, whos counting?"
they both laughed.
haha good story! keep on going!
uh....raging, what did u say, moogle can't read it!
thanks moon!
np I enjoy good stories!
which thread dyu wnt to start from im confused..read wot i wrote above
ch.3
while Hershe and Mike talked, a man walked into the club. he was wearing a grey hoody, blue jeans, green shoes, and gogles around his neck. on his head, he had a winter hat, covering his ears and big head phones over that. he walked quitly twards the bar, and then stoped. he looked at hersha and blushed. he closed his eyes, took a deep breath and continued forward.
"Hi guys....."he said quitly as he reached the 2 at the bar.
"Keara! guess what! u're customer still hasn't payed of her tab! what do u think she should do?" mike said in a almost threatening tone.
"huuuuuuu........" was all Keara could say before hersha broke in.
"don't leisten to him Keara! u and i know that i'll pay it off! just u wait and see!"
Keara looked from one to the other, a little distressed but still blushing.
"i...auuu....finished the work on u'r air ship for u hersha.....its in my garage, so just tell me when u need it and..."Keara said, while taking off his headphones and hat to reveal 2 spekaled ears on the side of his head.
"so how much will it coast her?" mike asked.
"well....ummm, mabey around $500, if u're all right with that" keara said, a little shyly.
"Ok! can i come around tomaro? i can't wait to see what u've done! u always do the best work!" hersha squealed.
"ok...." was all keara could muster out to say.
"guess i have to go get that money then don't i? well, see u tomaro, bye guys!" hersha waved and began to run off. she could hear Mike shouting after her about the bill as ran off into the night to go pawn the stollen vase.
raging, read the each chapter and the intro, if u want. just click "entire thread" bellow the respond box!>_<
I am liking this story Moogle, just pay a little attention to your spelling
arg spelling! moogle mortal enimy!!!!!
hahaha lol don't worry u can improve, I had the same problem
(wow...moogle never thought she'd get to chapter 4......)
ch.4
the next day, hersha walked down the country road and turned into a worn path. she ambled up to the log house and noked. whith no answere she opened the door and walked in. a note sat on the table. it red: i'm in the garage, help u'r self to anything in the fridge. Keara.
hershe put down the note, and walked out of the house and in the direction of a huge metal half cylinder shape builing.
the 2 big metal doors were open, allowing the radios music to escape and the smell of ship wax filled the air. she looked at her airship, all shiney and fixed. the shipe was about the size of an elephant, but in a shape of a plane. Keara was hunched ofer one of the wings, sweating as he waxed it. it didn't seem like he noticed her arival.
"nice job! though u always to a nice job!" she said smiling.
Keara jumped whe he heared her voice.
"well, i try my best...." he said.
she walked over to marval at his handywork. then she handed him a bag that jingled with the sound of coins.
"thanks....u'll need to try it out" he said, while taking the money and putting it on the work table against the wall.
"well, get in and lets go!" hersha said impatently. it seemed that she was already in the cockpit and starting the egnishin.
keara scrambled in and the the door shut behind him. he leaped into the co-pilot chair and watched as hersha gracefully steared the plan into the sky.
ok, moogle knows that there are ALOT of spelling mistakes in this one so please don't kill moogle >_<
of course won't :) Moogle I am emjoying this story really much, specially your main character, I am a lot like her lol
(thanks moon! now moogle just has to remember all of the srea names and how the next main character enters.....hummmm)
ch.5
keara always enjoyed the flight of airships, smooth, ajile, and with the right pilot, fun. hersha seemed to be overjoyed to see that her ship was just as fast, if not faster, and seemed to handle corners better. she threw the ship into the next gear and it rocketed into the sky. Keara held on a little titer to the arm rest a this point. Once hersha had had her fill of tricks, she let the ship glide. she then proceded to work some dials and buttons till a screen popped up. she anilized it, then let it pop out. the 2 seemed to sit very quitly for a while till a buzzing noise interupted the silence.
"Hersha! u're back in the air! i thought it was going to take forever when that bounty ship shot u down. hey! talk to me girl!!!! it was my fleet that saved u!!!!"
"ya ya...."hersha replied while bringing up another screen. this one showed the face of a human women, around 16,though she could have been older. she was very beautiful. she had long, brown hair, brown eye, and a very shaply body. her clothes looked almost excpenceve.
"so how are u Sora? brought the justice of ganmalies any ferther?" hersha asked in a playfull tone.
"how about u come and see for your self, convic?", sora said in response."Oh! hi Keara! seems like u did a good job! guess this is the test flight if u'r with her. how bout u guys come over for a visit? moms been so worried about u hersh, and it would be great practice for landing a speeder air ship in our hub! what do u say?"
Keara looked at hersha, she smiled.
"ok, we'll be there, just give me u'r location!"
then the screen went black. another poped up, showing a map and 2 blinking lighhts. Hersha steared to ship and flew off in the direction of a masive airship.
(ahhhh moogle doesn't think anyone is one, moogle shall wright more....)
ch.6
Hersha flew the air ship into the open mouth of the masive antic military air ship. Sora stood waiting for them, with a boy of 13 beside her. they seemed to be arguing about something. Keara sighed, sibling rifalry seemed so....silly. but being an only child, he really couldn't say.
"Hello loser," the boy said. it seemed he would rather be somewear else.
"hello pimpsquike!" hersha replied while Sora hit her brother on the head.
"ow! that hurt! mom will get mad if i tell her! u'll be sorry!" the boy said.
"just try me Bret! go tell mom there hear while u're at it!" sora said, while hugging hersha and greeting Keara. Bret ran down towards the door. Once he was out of ear shot, sora said, "sooooo! how are u! heard u'r bounty was raised again! u know u're not really promoting the image of ganmalie with stunts like u'rs!"
" Oh leave her alone Sora" came an older voice. soras mother came stroling in. she looking much like her daughter, but less shapely, and much older. She greeting Keara and hersha.
"so, have u heard the big news!"she said.
"what big news Ms. Patswan?" Keara asked quitly, while looking a little embarrased that he didn't know already.
"lets talk about it in the family room. once hearing this, u to should think about laying low for a while" she said, pointing to hersha and keara. they looked at each other, then at sora who shrugged. they all fallowed Ms. Patswan farther into the ship.
good!!
thanx! anything u think moogle should work on beside spelling?
Let's see, maybe a bit more focused on the character thoughts, that's all I can think right now, but the rest is really good!!Ohh and maybe I'll send you my story today
(ok!!! moogle shall do that! and moogle can't wait to read yours!!!)
ch.7
after being seated and served tea and cookies, Ms. Patswan began to explain,"it has come to serface that the Prince of Leahly has run away. So far, no one can find a motive ecept that he got into a fight with the queen".
"mmfff sooo chew chew what does that munch munch have to do with us?" hersha asked, while stuffing her face with cookies. Keara thought for a moment. If the Prince was gone, then surely there would be a reward. And if a ganmalie brought him back, then mabey the government would begin to see ganmalie as equals to humans!
"so if hersha brought him back....then mabey her bounty would be lifted!" Keara said inthuseasticly.
"well, i was thinking mabey she would help, but in the end, u would bring him back, Keara" sora's mother said while poring another cup of tea for him.
"Me?"
"yes, u Keara. think about it. not only would it look good for ganmalie's, but for half breads as well. it would show the government that u are an able person that can function well in society and want to help people out"
Keara mulled this over in his head. she was right. being a ganmalie, he wasn't treated very nicely. he wasn't alowed to go in human stores, or live in human communities. and because his father was a ganmalie, and his mother was human, this brought even more trouble, even if he was fallowing the rules. It would look good for his kind but..... he was just not the type of person to stand in the lime light.
"why can't hersha do it though? shes a half bread...sort of...and it would hopefully bringa truths to her little war against them", Keara said.
"ya! why can't i do it!" hersha demanded.
Ms. Patswan sighed,"Dear, u're just to.....flamboyent to be in the limelight. and besides, i think theyd arest u and accuse u of kidnaping him anyway"
"but....."Hersha muttered to herself. she new they were right. they would arest her. if not for all the crimes she's done, then for her blood. see, hersha was a very odd child. her mother was human, yet her father was part ganmalie, part human. she grew up in a little town. the town was very special for humans had grown to see ganmalie as equals. but, when hersha was only 7, the government came and captured all of the towns people. many fled, including hershas family but were killed. from the age of 7, hersha was an outlaw and an orphan. with her fathers sward at her side, she began to fight back. in the begining, she would only steel to keep herself alive, but as time went on, she began to steal to help other ganmalie in trouble. thats when she met Keara. a lonley air ship mechanic, an orphan, a half breed.
This one was really good!!
thanks! it exclanes alot about 2 of the characters. now moogle just have to think about how they get the prince......mabey, pick-pocketing? hahahaha, moogle can see it now....>_<
(ummmm, this next charactre swears alot soooo, be prepared for the ocasional "hell", "crap", and "shit")
ch.8
"I said, no smoking in front of my store!" yelled the store owner.
"will u shut up old hag!" siad the lankey human. he was leaning against the corner of a conveniance store, taking a long drag from the cigaret hanging from the stide of his mouth. the man was 16. He had pal skin, and light black hair. he wore almost tight black cargo pants, and a almost tight black t-shirt. around his neck, a navyblue strip of fabric hung aroundit, tied up in the back and hanging down to his wast. his wrists were covered by black bands.
"thats it! i'm calling the police, u stupid kid!" the women yelled.
"sokay, fine with me, it'll be u they arest though." the boy said again. then he walked away. the women went back inside her store and left the phone in its jack.
Toro was bord out of his mind. not only was the entire military looking for him, his crazy cousin was truing to kill him. he chukled to himself, most boys his age would love to be a prince. you get loads of cash, hot babes, and in the end, u get to run the world. Toro took another drag on his cigaret. why didn't his mother believe him. she always took his cousins side.
"stupid women" he muttered. he thought back to the the night it all happened. Toro was gambling with his cousin in the parlore. then all of a sudden, his cousin pulled out a gun and pointed at him.
"i'm going to be king, little cousin" he grind. at that moment Toro kicked the table up, hitting Sam, his cousin, in the face. He ran down the palec hall and into the study.
"mom...pant pant sam pant pant gun....pant pant" toro tried to explane. he's stupid mother didn't believe him. even after they intarigated the bastered, he didn't fess up, Toro thought. thats why he was on the run. no way was he going to let some idiot cousin kill him. he had gone threw to much hell being prince to be killed now and get no glory of being king. Toro ambled down the street and into a bar.
yes! that is moogles e-mail! could u please delete that post after though? moogle doesn't want everyone to know her e-mail.
ok
haha, I like this prince really much!! lol
ya! Toro is really funny! just wait till Hersha mets him! there will diffenently be fur flying!!! >_<
lol I would love to see it, I sended you the story right now!! check it out!!
Send me yours too please!!
moogle is waiting....waiting....damn! moogles computer is slow! moogle isn't getting it! just wait though....give moogle minute to beat her computer up >_<
hahaha ok
whats u'r e-mail address again?
ok1 moogle wrote it down1 now just wait as moogle copy and pasts everything! (u can deleat u'r post if u want)
ok
moogle sent it! did u get it?
no, but no worries my computer is really slow
now I did
arg!!!! why can't moon and moogle send e-mails!!!!!! pooie pooie >_<
oh good!!!! never mind the above post!!!
(shall moogle wright another chapter? yes she shall!!!)
ch.9
"why is everyone talking like we already have the prince!!!" sora shouted, making keara jump and hersha to stop eating cookies, if only for a moment.
"well, he can't be to hard to find when we have an airship, mechanic, bandet, and resestance group." hersha said, shruging.
Sora was getting angry, "this is so stupid! the chances that we find one guy in a whole planet is so unlikely! and lets not forget the fact that the whole military has already started looking for him and has found nothing!"
"sora, relax. look, we know he'll be in the capital. he can't of gone far. we also know he won't be in any area were alot of ganmalie are, royalty hate ganmalie. we'll flush him out some how," responded Ms. Patswan, looking a little anoyed at her daughter.
"well, lets get started! i can't wait to see the look on his face when an outlaw finds him!" hersha said, while getting up and saying good by to Ms.Patswan. the 4 of them got up and went back to hersha's air ship. this time, sora sat as co-pilot, while keara sat in the passenger seat.
"guess we'll have to assume that the ships all ready to go don't we Keara?" hersha said smilling.
"guess so..."keara mumbled. he would have rathered that they spend some more time tuning up the ship, but, who was he to say, he was only the mechanic. and besides, if it made hersha happy, what did it matter.
The hatch opened, and they were air born again, heading to the capital of Leahly.
aww Keara has a crush, how sweet! keep on going! I am liking this!
moogle knows!! isn't he cute!!! kyaaaaaa!!!!! has moogle described hes hair? moogle thinks not...moogle must in next chapter....
maybe I'll make a cover drawing for this story, that is if you don't mind
wait till u know all the characters inside and out! and there relation ships with each other!!!
moogle would love a drawing of them!!!(moogle always wanted to draw them but....moogles drawing have something to be desiered.....to be blunt, moogle sucks at drawing)
ok I'll wait
thanks!!! (really, moogle can't wait! moogle is already excited, yet to tied to wright another chapter, stupid work, making moogle tied >_<)
did u like my story?
moogle only red the first chapter....and loved it!!! u have a gift dear child!!!! moogle receved the 4 other e-mails, but will read them in the moring. U don't know how stress full work was today! the girl befor left moogle with less then a roll of penies!!!!!
aww thanx, I wish for you to get less stressed
well, it was all moogles falt anyway...moogle wasn't paying attention to what number she was punching into the cash, and then moogle would have to figure out all the change with what they gave her.....it was a nightmare!! moogles just glade thelma wasn't wathing when it happened.....
lol
at least moogle say her friend before she started work. he seemed happy enogh. and he didn't even pop it! moogle was soooo releaved that he didn't.
(oooouuuu chapter 10!!!!! the first mile stone!!!!)
Ch.10
the ship landed in the merky waters of the ganmalie port. Keara hated this port. it was so dirty. the water always ruind the sides of the airship, and decreased the potency of the air stones. Baggers filled the streets of the run down part of the capital. Ganmalies walked in and out of many small stores. the smell was the worst part though. because this part of the town was so close to the water, it always had a decaing sort of smell.
Sora always seemed out of place in Ganmalie neighbourhods. She looked down at her unmarked, uncovered right arm. then she glanced at kearas, lower part of his right arm. just as she new it would be, he had wraped bandages around it. to think that humans hate the ganmalie so much that they brand them, sora thought, pulling out a picture from her pocket. The prince looked back at her from the news clipping. she glanced around, looking for the same face, but all her eyes could see were covered up arms.
"well, keara and i will have to sneak into the human side. we'll meat u there?" hersha asked. ganmalie weren't alowed in the nicer part of the capital, that part was reserved for humans. Sora noded in agreement and then they slpit up.
Keara sighed. He always loved spendeing time alone with hersha, but today, he new it wouldn't be very quiet. he had a sneaking suspetion that something big was going to happen, and that he would be held responsible.
Aww I love Keara, he is sooo cute!! those cruel humans, branding the poor ganmalies!!
Great job Moogle!!
thanks!!!! yes!! Keara is very cute!!!! but still can't find a spot to add in a description of his hair!!! >_<
maybe you could make that a really strong wind came and maked his hair move and then add the description of his hair
good idea!!!! moogle shall do that!
ok glad I helped you
Moogle are u there??
ch.11
Sora sat waiting in her usual spot for thinks like this. she glanced at her watch. they should be hear in 5 minutes, she thought. this part of the capital was spectacular. the building were wimsical, and bright. no one bagged at the side of stores. every human looked healthy and the gardens filled the air with a floural smell. there was a definate change in lifestyles from one side to the other. sora closede her eye and waited for her friends arival.
the wind blew stongly threw the streets. hersha started to get anoyed with it and began to walk backward, so that the black shiny hair was blown away from her face. Keara didn't like to wind much either. he never realy felt comfortable about they was many femals would gaze at his blowing hair. keara always cut his hair slitly long, about to 2" from is skelp. that wasn't the problem though. about every other square inche of his hair was a darker shad of his "original" dirty blond hair. sometimes, the clumps of miss-massching hair even grew black or blond. this oddity always drew him odd gazes, for people always wondered why he would dye his hair that way. he didn't. it just grew like that.
The 2 turned onto a side street when hersha bumped into soemone.
"ah! i'm so sorry sir. it was my fault, i wasn't looking at were i was going!" hersha said, in almosta pleading tone. Keara looked apologetic, till he noticed that the man was a human.
Toro looked at the girl who had walked into him.
"what the hell do u think u were doing! u should watch were u were going stupid!" Toro said, anoyed. then he almost choked on the smoke he was inhaling from his cigaret. a wanted poster was taped behind the stupid girl he was yelling at. the poster had a ganmalie girl waving at the photographer. it looked like she was jumping off, and away from a fence. the girl waving was the idiot who walked into him! and she was dangerouse! her bounty was a couple of million dollars!
Keara gasped when he noticed the picture behind the rude man. a cocky boy looked out of the fancey missing poster stapled to the side of a lampost. tho there clothes were different, the smug look on there faces were identical. hersha had found the person they were looking for!
sorry! moogle was typing this! next time moogle shall give worning >_<
ok
finally!! they found him!!
ya! now the next thing is, is to see if moogle can wright od fight scene.....that might be a problem.....
I can help you with that if you want
thanks
just be sure you descride very good the movements and the envoirement and make the movement quick, do u get the idea??
ummm why the environment?
because environment give the reader an idea of what is going on. i am actually working very hard on description... not easy not at all...
sorry i do not mean to butt in 8(
because you know the people around, the buildings, the weather all those things are importnat for the people to imagine better the scene
ok! moogle understands! (and lost, u'r always free to but in! u to moon!!!)
Thanx!! glad you understood, I am not that good explaining
don't worry >_<
very Final Fantasy! i actually like it which is not surprising very sci fi fantasy genre going on.
Here is me thoughts:
ok i am finding it hard to understand every thing (it is probably cause i came in late on this one)
i am also having a problem with the human part of your story. there is a few good bits of dialouge and what not but i am not getting any human emmotions from it. it is like you are missing a few things like: what the character is feeling. what they ar ethinking, how they are reacting mind wise.
I also think it is a bit rushed. which is ok because i know this is just the begining of the story.
But keep up on it and i promise i will try to keep up with it.
moogle felt that to....when someone is thinking, how do u show that? do u wright it down like a dialoge with "and"?
(ya!! some one noticed the final fantasy theme!!!! if u play FF12, u'll see what moogle thinks hershas air ship looks like, and all the others...moogle can't imagin airships very well....)
here i will post an idea on a new thread Called Ideas. i am still new at it so forgive me
haha I would of course notice the undertones of Final Fantasy and actually i was thing of FF12 when reading it lol i can see the air ship but do not know how to describe it
well whe I make my character thoughts I put this symbol : * * so people will know that those are their thoughts
scratch that i will put it on my thread of my story ok
air ships are so detailed!!! >_<
there go to New Story and read the little blip
ch.12
hersha was getting defensive now.she had apologiesed, yet he was still being rude! and to make things worse, why was a human in the lower part of the capital?
"Hersha....i think u should take him down..." Keara wispered into her ear. Even though Keara hated violence, he new that this would be the only way to get the prince to cooperate.
"u stay out of this mut!" Toro growled. he didn't like ganmalies specially those who didn't respect humanse. He slide his foot back and to the side, taking a fighting stance. Herha rsponded to hisaction by mimiking him and reching for her sward. Hersha loved fights. she smiled, and hopped this guy wouldn't be a push over, like her last aponent.
"Keara, mabey u should go get sora....." Hersha said, now grining with ecitment.
"ok...don't get hert." Keara said, baking away before turning his back and running.
"i don't like fighting little girls,dog, but today i'll make an eception. feel hounered." Toro said, snikering to him self. He took his cigaret out of his mouth and let it fall out of his hands and onto the dirty cobblestone. He instinktafly smeared it with his black boot.
"shall we start....u'r majasty?" hersha said, grining even more. at that moment toro kicked his leg up, putting dirt in the air. at the same time, hersha dogged the attack and jumped onto the edge of a brick fence, her sward back into its scabourd. the dirt slowly settled as toro spun around, not to leaves his back opean.
"U giving up, slut? or have u decided to run? hmm?" toro chanted. he looked a little to confindent as he slowly pulled himself into a casual stance. hersha laughed. he actually thought that he was better then her! Princes were arogant, she thought. this reaction seemed to make him angry. hhow fun this fight was going to be!
"Whats so funny dog! u luaghing to cover up u'r fear?"
"nope!, just at u'r lack of ability!"
"i'll show u lack of-" butbefore he couldfinish his nag, he found himself pined down to the grownd. Toro couldn'r believe what was happening! he tried to jump up, but to no prevail. the witch(yes u guys all know what moogle was going to say, but....) must have wayed 1000pound to be keeping him down like this. he looked up to see now why he couldn't get up. the other ganmalie was back...with a human girl.
"U get off of me!!! u pice of shit!!!" He yelled. the human pulled something out of her hand bag. before he could identify what it was, he was tasting it.
"tape! the greatest invention in all of Leahly!" Sora said, very pleased with herself. Toro tryed to say some thing but,to no preval.
"keara, will u do the honours?" sora said, handing him a rock, the size of 2 fists.
"i...a..." Keara mumbled, loking at it, with descust.
"i'll do it!" hersha said, grabing the rock and hitting toro and the head with it.
really good work on the descriptions!!8O
thanks! moogle was realy trying this time top get it right1 (thiugh moogle still thinks the end could have been writen a little better >_<)
moogle wishes she could have made hersha pickpocket him though
moogle has not left the bord!!! moogle is just wrighting the next chapter so please be patient
ch,13
even before toro opened his eyes, he could tell he had a bump on hes head. he really disliked ganmalies. they were always so violent! when he did open his eye's, he found he was lieing on a bed. the rome was small. all it could hold was a bed, and a desk with a chair. on the desk sat a cup, and a pithcher of water. he looked around some more. the bed had drores under neath it. he pulled on out. it was emty. toro stud up and stretched. he was captered, he thought. how could he let some stipid ganmalie girl capture him, much less hert him? that when the door slid open with an automatic sound. ther stud the human femal that had helped in the capture. she really did have a beautiful body he thought, sizing her up.
"hear, nothings druged or poisoned." she said, while putting down a plate with a sandwitch on it.
"we don't treat hostages like animals hear." sora continued.
"and who is we?" toro demanded.
"we are a people resistance group. our family and followeres are human but we fight for ganmalie equality." sora stated, with a monotone tone.
"and what are u going to do with me? kill, rape?" toro aked with a smile on his face. he wouldn't mind the second option. before he could interigate sora more a hand hit him across the face.
"what the hell was that for!!!" toro screamed.
"what do u think!!!! u think i'm some sort of slut, don't u!!1 well i'm not!! and don't u try aything!!!!! all we WERE going to do was hand u to your mother with a request that the government begin to see ganmalies as equals!!!" sora screamed at him. why were all human boys so perverted and crule!!
Toro replied, "i'd still rather that u-"
another slap in the face
"what the hell is wrong with u women!" toro demanded, beginging to get mad.
"u actually don't want to return to u'r little palice, pretty boy?"
"no i don't! why did u think i left?"
"becuase momy didn't aprove of u sleeping around?"
"no"
"then why"
"because my idiot cousin wants to kill me, so he can become the heir to the thron!".sora stoped at that moment. her face fell a little. if what the prince said was true, then, mabey, she couldn't traid him in for equality.
"so...do u have a name girly?" toro asked, a little less strongly. by the look on the girls face, he might not be sent straight to his death.
"sora, and i'm not u'r guard. u're alowed o leave this room if u like. actually, i'm hear to escort u to our captin. after u finishe lunch." she pointed to the sandwitch.
"what ever" toro grumbled, while walking out the door. sora followed, the guided him to the bridge of the air ship.
ch.14
Toro walked into what looked to be a conference room. at the end of the long tabl, sat an older woman, with her hands folded like she was thinking very hard. the on the right of her, sora moved to sit. beside her sat the femal ganmalie that fought him, and across from her, was the other, the male.
"please, sit down" said the Ms. Patswan, jesturing with her hand to the empty across from her. Toro grumbled, and sat down. then another older man waled in and stood at the door. Probably to make sure he doesn't make a run for it, Toro thought.
"As u have already probably guessed, we are a ganmalie resistance group." Ms. Patswan said, looking more and more perfesional and time went on.
"ya, and u want to had me over to my mom, so u guy can look good. to bad its not happening" Toro replied.
"and why not!" sora demanded, getting a little to angree."We have u hostage1 we can do what ever we want!"
"u going to had me over so i can die?" toro said, a little more curiouse.
"what?" Hersha said, looking back and forth between sora and toro. Toro explained the situation and all was quite.
"well, if what u say is true, then it would look horrible on us if we returned u and then u droped dead." thought sora's mother.
"uhh...may i say something" wispered Keara. everyone could tell that he didn't want to be there.
"go ahead Keara"
"well...its just that....mabey if we were able to show the world what was going on, if what u say is true, then mabey, the queen would see that ganmalies are ok......." Keara trailed off.
"thats a wonderfull idea!!!" Hersha said, jumping out of her seat. The rest of them looked all a little suprised by the reaction, especialy toro, who looked a little discusted by the behavour.
"u might be on to something Keara" sora's mother said, while Keara turned reder and reder.
"but what if everything Toro says is a lie! then we might be the one's doing time! or dieing!!" Sora stated.
"very true, but...it deos sound kind of fun."that was the first time the man behind Toro had spoken. toro turned around to look at him. he was tall, and looked very strong. his features were much like the woman at the end of the table.
"yes, but...Sora does have a point brother" Ms.Patswan said, deep in thought again.
"wait, the womans in charge, and u'r her little bus boy?" toro asked, a little confused.
"of course she is! she's my older sister! first in line, as some might say. but i am not her bus boy!" The man stated. "oh! and forgive me for not intoducing myself, i'm Jasper Patswan, at the service of all ganmalie." he said cheerfully.
"well,im going to think about this for a while, sora, how about u show our guest around?" Ms. patswan said, gettiing up and heading to the door.
"Oh great! i get stuck with pretty boy hear" sora complained.
"u think u got it bad! i have to stay in the same place as all u ganmalie lovers!!!" growned toro, not looking to pleased that he wasn't being droped off anytime soon.
"well.....i have to go....bye" keara said, looking a little embarasses as he walked out the door and toward the carreier that held hershas airship.
"i think i'll help him" hersha smiled and ran after him, making Keara jump as she jumped beside him, laughing and smiling.
"disgusting" toro spat, and followed them out the door.
"what, wait!" sora said, following the growing group walking down the hall.
what do u think?
really good, now the adventures begin!!
ya! then to good part come!!!!
ch.15
They all endied up in the airship caryer. Keara wore his forest green overall, and his goggles over his eyes while he scrubed muck off from the bottom of hersha's airship. Hersha scrubed the sides of the ship, trying to not get her sleevs wet in the proces. sora leaned aganst the work table, chating with hersha. Toro leaned against a wall, not talking to any one, till he said,
"hey woman!"
"i told u not to call me that!" sora spat back at him. "u'll to call me by my name, sora!"
"what ever, who else is on this ship?"
"well, lets see..."sora thought"well, in residence, theres myself, my brother, my mom, my uncle and his family, and 3 other families. and then hersha and keara and u are hear to."
"what about u'r dad?" Toro asked, a little curiousely. sora looked down when he said it. it hurt thinking about her father.
"...he's dead", she replied.
" oh." Toro said looking the other way.
"thats all u can say to the poor girl! what kind of maners do u have prince?!" hersha began, taking a break from her scrubing.
"what were u expecting for me to say? u want me to say 'i'm sorry' to my capturer?"
"we'll from what u say, were almost u'r savours!"
"i'd be fine on my own!"
"well if we could fiind u, then i'm sure the army would be able to-"
"can we please just stop it!" sora yelled, still looking a little sad, but now even more anouyed then before.
"sorry" answered hersha and then looking at toro, who just looked away again.
"and u mut?" toro finally asked.
"who me!?!?! my named hersha use-"
"what ever, forget i asked" toro yeled back.
"u want to know were my family is? well there all dead! i grew up with my mother and father in the far north city were humans and ganmalie lived peacefully. one day the government came and masacured us all. my parents died for me. both my uncles died to and i never met my granparents. i've rased myself sence i was 7. happy now?" toro was speachless. he looked at hersha, a little at tears now. then keara cralled out from under the ship and sat up, looking at hersha. he took her hand, a little cosousely.
"and u?" toro directed this question at keara who looked angeraly at him for upsetting hersha.
"my father was a ganmalie, my mother human." /keara said, while taking off his goggles and getting out of his greesy overalls.
"we leaved out side a large village. my father fixed airships for a living. thats all we lived on. then one day, my father left us. i still don't know if he's alive or not. after that, a human family freind who had trained with my father tot my how to fix and build air ships. i became his aprentice for a few years, just urning enough money for my mother and myself. then when i was 13, my mother died of ilness. i've lived alone ever since."
now hersha squeazed kearas hand, making him blush even further.
"u'r turn" hersha said, looking at toro. "lets hear what really happened to the royal family"
"its just as the tabloids said. my father died when i was 5, from ilness. thats all there is to it."
a long poss filled the room. it was as if everyone was afraid to break the silence as if there life was on the line. then finally, soemone spoke.
"well, now that u know were we're all coming from, why don't u try giving us some more respect?" sora aked, looking a little defensive.
"mabey" toro shrugged. he walked out the door and back to his room. he had alot to think about. Keara, hersha, and sora looked at eachother and went back top work without speaking.
ch.16
the next morning, toro wandered into the kitchen. there he saw the rest of the crew. each family had there own table, were children and adults ate and chated about what they were going to do that day. toro looked around some more. they were all human. every family fighting was human! he began to wonder just how many humans felt that ganmalie were equal. then sora's mother walked up from behind and told him to sit with her. he abliged, with a little mumble about no other resistance would treat there captive like this. he sat across from a teen boy, who must have been soras brother, for they had the same nose and mouth. the boy continued to look at toro. sora sat on toros left, while her mother on his right. they boy continued to stare.
"wil u stop doing that!!! u little-"toro began to say befor he was hit on the head by sora.
"what the-" another punch.
"u crazy women, u-" and another.
"so swearing!" sora stated, without looking up from her eggs. sora's mother rolled her eyes.
"be nice to our guest, or he won't let us help him." she said, continuing to eat.
"so u've decided to not let me go?" toro asked, befor digging into the plate of food that was just set down infront of him by a women who must have been the ships cook.
"sort of, i've decided that we will help u. but, my fleat will not be doing the houners. Sora and hersha have sgreed to help. u will be with them at all times. u three will do whatever u can to bring equality to ganmalie, and alow u to take the throne, without dieing in the procces."
"WHAT!!! HELL NO!!!! THERE IS NO WAY THAT I WILL WORK WITH THAT CRAZY WOMAN!!!!!" toro yelled, standing up in the procces. the room became quite, and everyone began to stare at him.
"looser", sora's brother snickered.
"what was that?" toro demanded, sendiing inviable daggered at the boy.
"thats the was it is, take it or we'll drop u from the ship, without any way to float down." Ms. patswan explained.
"arg..." toro replied, sitting down in his chair, no longer in the mood for food. then Keara walked in, carying a sleeping hersha on his back. Sora got up and brought a chair beside her. Keara placed hersha down, allowing her to sleep with her head on the table, while he went to grab another chair for himself.
"good morning Keara," sora's mother said, getting up and getting a plate of food for him and hersha"
"good morning....thank u" keara replied, sitting down and begining to eat. then sora began to fan the food into hershas face. the reaction was almost funny to toro. hersha began to niff theair like a dog, befor openoing her eyes enough to know that food had been served. she then sprang to life and chow.
moogle shall finshe this later, bye bye
(please reread the last couple or lines in ch.16. sorry about it but moogle had to leave suddenly so the chapter didn't end nicly.)
ch.17
Toro almost smiled at the reaction.
"so u've comed down about u'r new situation?" sora said, grining at him.
"no" toro spat back at her. sora kept on smiling.
"u'll munch munch be staying slrurp munch with us at much gulp kearas house." hersha said, inbetween mouthfulles of her breakfast.
"hersha, chew, swallow then talk" Ms. Patswan said, loosing her leader voice and becoming more like a mother.
"i am not staying in the muts house!" toro replied, making keara shrink a little in his chair.
"to bad, cause u are! end of desicution!" Sora shot back at him.
"ARG! i can't win against u people!!!!" Toro growned loudly, making hersha and sora smile.
"we leave as soon as hershas done stuffing her face" sora said, getting up and putting her dishes in a big plastic bin.
"what ever" toro said, getting up, lighting a cigaret and walking back to his room. keara sighed to himself. the next couple of days wasn't going to be easy. he'd have to hid both hersha and toro while still working of airships. it was always hard enough to get hersha to stay in the house without making any noise, and now toro! keara began to shake his head.
"well, i better get all my stuff packed!" sora said, running out the door and to her room. Keara waited for hersha to finish, befor walking with her to the airship carryer and begin packing.
"this is going to fun to watch..." sora's mother said to herself befor telling soras brother to finish eating his eggs.
ch.18
after forcing Toro into the ship, they were off. sorring threw the sky was what hersha loved best. she enjoyed herself very much when she did tlips and sharp turns, felling in controle, yet still being pulled on by the wind around her. once near the house, she began to slow down and then glided to a hult in front of the massive door of the garage. every one climbed out and keara began the procetion down the path to the old log house.
"i have to sleep in that piece of crap?" Toro asked, looking a little disgusted. Hersha began to eye him gettiing the same reaction from toro. they reached the house and keara pulled out a very old looking key and sliped in into the lock. he turned it with a few shakes and then swang the door open. they all stepped inside. the house was very open concep. the only actual room was a little bathroom in the far right end of the small house. beside that was stairs that curled upward to the upper part of the house which was only a loft that held a bed, makeup dresser, and a old closet that sat against the railing, creating a sort of wall. on the left of the house was the famliyroom that held the woodburning fernece. behind that was a worktable with airstones sitting on it and a lage desk full of papers that needing sorting. on the right of the front door was the kitchen. the only apliences were an old fridge that didn't look to reliable, and an old stove. the table was crude, but very sturdy and could seat 6. sun shone threw the kitchin window and on to the floor, revealing a thin layer of dust and dirt.
"sorry for the house being in such a mess, i havent hadd time to clean to clean it up.....please, make u'r self at home. Hersha walked instinktavly to the fridge and pulled out some food and began to prepare it. sora lugged her bag of stuff up the stairs and ploped it onto the sagging bed.
"if shes sleeping up there, were am i supposed to sleep?" toro demanded, dreding the answere. keara blushed and began to look apologetic.
hersha spoke,"sora and i are sleeping in keara bed, u to get to fight over the couches". toro turned to look at the stained, and sagging furnitcher.
"oh hell no!" he said walking over and sitting down on one.
"sorry..." keara said, walking over to the cluttered desk and going threw some papers. sora started to climb down the stairs at that point.
"keara, have u told him about the house rules yet?" sora said, making her way to help hersha, who was fidling with the stove"
"oh...well, because of the situation, u and hersha aren't allowed to leave the house without sora or my permishion. when i have a costermere in the garage, u have to be very quiet and not draw attention to the house. if anyone found out that i was hidding u 2, then......"
"we'd all have our heads lobbed off!" hersha finished, setting the table.
"WHAT! u mean i can't leave the house!?!?!!?" toro yelled, getting up and sitting on one of the kitchen chairs.
"well, on some days, we'll go to town and u guys can be seen by as many people u want." sora said, tasting something hersha made making a face. toro looked at her with the most confused expression he could find.
"well, you see, the town is a ganmalie freindly town. and because of that, its full of people who support hersha. no bounty hunters dare enter it. as long as keara, hersha, and myself are with u, no one will report u, not like they would in the first place tho", sora explained, bringing plates of food to the table. Keara clicked on the radio on the counter and music started to play. hersha sat down and they began to eat.
very funny!!
ya! actually, the house is almost the same as dady moogles friends house. hes has a bigger upsatiars, and he has animal skulls sitting on the beems that hold up the house. oh! and his kitchen is newer, tho not by much.
ch.19
after dinner, keara cleared the table and began to wash the dishes. hersha made her way to go help him but he shooed her off saying that she cooked so he'd clean. with that hersha sighed and went beck to the famuilyroom and colapsed into a big old chair that had ducktape all over it to keep iy from spilling foam. the radio stilled played and hersha and sora fell into a deep conversation about nothing and toro laid down and the couch and closed his eyes. suddenly, a nock on the door made everyone jump. sora looked at hersha who graped toro and ran up the stairs with him. Keara walked shakingly to the door and answered it.
"hello keara! how've u been? go'in to leave me waiting?" asked to middle aged man, making his way into the house. keara sighed in relefe.
"sorry mike, i was afraid that u might have been the police coming to take me away for hiding outlaws," keara replied, shutting the door behind him and putting the cetle on for some tea. hersha began to push toro down the stairs, almost making him fall.
"watch it woman!" toro spat at her, pulling himself together and walking himself down the rest of the way.
"hello mike!" hersha greated, running up to him and sitting down at the kitchen table.
"hello hersha." mike replied, smiling and folowing her lead to sit down. "so keara, just how many outlaws are u hiding these days", mike asked, looking around the room at sora and toro. keara blushed and set down some tea cups.
"hello, i'm sora, i beleave we've already met." sora said, shaking mikes hand and smiling.
"yes, i believe we have. and u'r not an outlaw are u?" he asked tilting his head in thought.
"no, i'm not. tho i will probably will be soon." she replied. at this point toro had sat down and was glaring at mike, his arms folded across his chest.
"and who are u?" mike asked, noticeing toros icy glare.
"none of u'r bussness!" toro spat, begining to look the other way. wiht that hersha hit toro on the head.
"what was that for!"
"mind u'r manners!"
"like u'r one to tell me!"
"we'll at least i've been better then u so far!"
"oh ya?"
"ya!"
"will both of u SHUT UP!!!" sora yelled, looking very angree ant both of them. with this they both shrank into their chairs.
"hes the prince, ahrd to believe but true. were helping him fight back for his throne" sora replied, glaring at toro, who once again, loked the other way. by this time the tea was ready and keara pored everyone a cup and sat down.
"oh, well then, i'm sorry u'r majesty. please forgive my maners. my name is Mike Collin, at u'r service" he said teasingly. toro wasn't very apresiative. "so, how did this unlikely set up happen?" he asked, looking at keara who once again, blushed in responce.
"well..."keara stamerd, begin to look down at his lap. he told of the meating and why they decided to help. the whole time mike just listened and noded his head. hersha and sora sipped ther tea and toro grumbled at sertain parts of the story, making keara blush even more.
"well, i hope everything turns out in the end, for all u'r sakes." mike said, drinking his tea.
"ya...." keara mumbled, loosing a little of the red in his face.
"so why are YOU hear? why is a human visiting a ganmalie?"toro aked, still looking the other way. with this comment, hersha's face turned angree and was about to say something when mike broke in.
"because i reased him." he replied smiling. Keara looked down again at his lap, blushiing again.
"what?" toro sked, looking a little shocked.
"well, kearas father, alex, and i trained together when we were young. we were best friends and both of us loved to make airships. when he got older he found a lover and had a child with her. tho becuase he was a ganmalie, and she was human, they weren't allowed to marrie. he rased keara with Micheal till keara was older. then he left them. i began to viset more and more often because with his leaving, Micheal became more and more sick. in the end she did die and i began to raise Keara myself. its was what alex would have wanted." mike finished, still smiling at began patting keara and the back.
"what ever" toro replied. he hated to know what ganmalie went threw. they were lower clas why, did he care so much, he thought to himself.
"well, i'd better go keara, thanks for the tea." mike got up and waved goodbye. Hersha and sora waved back a sent back the greating. Keara got up and hugged the man. and walked him tomthe door. once mike was gone, hersha and sora went upstairs and went to bed, after warning toro that if he tried anything that he'd be dead in the moring. Keara pulled some old blankets from out of a wooden box and made a makeshift bed on the couches. toro called to the bigger one. Keara laided down on the other one and fell asleep. to many thoughts wereled around in toro's head as he shut his eyes. he didn't have a very good sleep that night.
mmmm i luv the name michael..
the airship idea's tres cool, where did u get that idea?
Final fantasy! were else!!!!
(ooooohh guess what, moogle on chapter 20!!! so many chapters, so little time!!)
ch.20
the sunning sun beam woke toro up. he turned over but he was awake. he sat up and looked around. the house was fiiled with sunshine. sora was in the kitchen making something that smelt of eggs, and toast. the radio was on, tho not very loud. toro stretched, and stood up from the lumpy cowch. he staggered to the kitchen were sora tuned around and pounted to the tinny room that was the bathroom.
"keara said thats there should be enogh water if u want to take a shower. 15 minutes tops tho." sora said, tuning around at the end to continue her cooking. toro grumbled a reply and went to take a shower, shuting the door a little to loudly.
Keara was outside, nealing by a stone with something ingraved on it. a loud slam came thundering over the field to reach his ears. he stood up and looked in the direction of the house. he knew it was probably toro acting up or hersha had follen off the bed. he chuckled to himself and walked down the worn path to his home.
the slamed door had indead woken hersha. now with her consence awak, the suns rays seemed even brighter then befor. she glanced out the window at the top of the bed to see keara troting down the path to the house. Hersha smiled and laid her head down on the pillow. she'd let keara "wake her up" this morning.
sora had gotten up with the sun. she had greated keara befor he left to pay respects to his mother. The backon was almost done and so was the toast. the eggs had been ready for a while now. she set the table and began to eat, not waiting for anyone.
"hi" keara said, opening the door and walking in. sora gestered to the stairs and keara new that hersha wasn't up yet. he climbed the stairs a little to fats to seem uneager. hersha lay there pretending to be asleep. keara looked at her for a few seconds. she was wearing one of his old wornout t-shirts and probably stole one of his boxers from the drwor that sat half open. he sat down on the bed and began to nudge her, feeling his cheeks turn red. hersha opened one eye and then another, while covering her the rest of her fave with the old sheet. she began to laugh at kearas bewildered expresion. with that, keara scoped her up and carred her down the stairs to then set her on a chair to eat. hersha smelt the food and began to serve herself while keara did the same. by then the water had turned off and toro finally walked out, looking hungerally at the food. they all began to eat without anything said.
which ff?
all FF have airships! tho the most influention FF for this story if FFXII (or 12, however u want to call it!)
oh shit! moogle just remembers that she used the name mike already!!! AAHHHHH the bartenders name is now.........um.......rex! there! watch moogle forget it in seconds!!!!
ch.12
that day, keara spent most of his time in the garage workingon costermeres airships. sora was in town buying food and supplies and hersha and toro spent the day inside the house complaining to each other. when the sun began to set, sora rolled in on kearas dirty jeep. keara was taking a shower and toro was sitting in the kitchen chair looking none to pleased to be there. hersha ran to help sora and they filled the fridge. keara finished and walked out, his hair stuck to his head.
"well, after diner, how about we go to town and hit the club?" sora sugested, smiling at hersha. toro growned a yes. keara noding, thinking to himself that it was a good idea to have takin the shower.
after diner was done and so was the dishes, they all climbed in to the jeep, with keara driving. toro was beside him not realy caring for much of anything. hersha was bouncing in her seat with excitment like a baby going for there first car ride. sora looked out to the left, her hair blowing everywere. keara drove till the outside of town. he parked the car outside a garage. they all jumped out and headed to the louder part of town. toro's eyes were wide open. he had never seen such a big town that was full of ganmalie and humans. every one was friends with eachother. no one was treated differently because of there rase. he couldn't believe it. the bass of soome music came pounding up from an underground club. hersha led the group into the pounding music. the club was full of humans and ganmalie dancing and laughing.
"sora! long time no see!" a voice yelled. they all turned to se who it was coming from. rex(ok ppl, this guys the same bartender from before but moogle just changed his name)waved to the group to came have a drink. they obliged.
"so, were have u guys been?", rex asked, pouring them all a glass of something.
Keara blushed at the question and said,"well....were kind of helping the prince....and the resestance for at the same time..." he then glanced at hersha who smiled in response, making him look down at his drink and sheepishly smile.
"oh! is that u then, our majesty?" rex asked, laughing at the end.
"oh woulds u shut up!" toro spat, getting angery at everyones reaction to the tittle.
"why don't u take u'r on advice! now come dance!" sora said making her way to the dance floor.
"hey! wait up!" hersha called, getting off the stool and squrming threw the crowd.
"theres u'r chance keara." rex said, servince some otherc people drinks and looking at hersha. keara looked at him and then looked at hersha.
"but it can't dance..." keara replied, looking back to his half full glass.
"i don't think that matters, hear she comes now" rex replied and with that hersha did come out of the crowed, waving for keara to come over. keara looked at toro and then rex who noded. keara put down his glass and walked over. they disapeared into the crowed.
"u'r making a fool out of him" toro said, finishiing his drink and looking for another.
"well it like to think that everyone has someone speciel waiting for them in life." rex replied, filling up toros glace.
" and then why aren't u chasing after a one?" toro replied, taking a swing of the concoction that was in his glass.
"i haven't found him yet"
"wait, u mean her, right?
"no him."
"WHAT!" toro yelled, looking a little scared.
"u have a problem that i'm gay? well get used to it." rex laughed, serving yet another drink to a girl at the end.
"toro began to back away, but was intercepted by sora who came to get a drink.
toro turned to sora and said "did u know that this guys gay?"
sora looked hard at toro for a second and said,"so? what does someones tast in love have to do with u? and why would i care either?" toro sighed. it was going to be a long night.
oopsie! moogle ment ch21!!!!
umm, who actually reads moogles story besides lost and moon?
hello?
moogle was just wondering, thanks!
ch.22
the group got home very late and fell asleep as soon as they hit there beds. the next moring was like any other. they day continued on just like the last one. so did the night. days turned into weeks. every thing was fine till late after dinner one night. everyone was the family room. hersha was stuffing her face with cookies that sora had just made. toro was lying on the longer of the two chouches, taking a long drag froom his cigaret. keara was sitting in the old chair, listening to the radio, humming along to an old jazz tune. sora was beside herself trying to get toro to stop smoking in the house. he was ignoring her. all of a sudden, the phone rang. keara walked over to answere the old fashion phone, sitting across the room from him.
"....keara, pant pant there comeing, weeze huff u all have to leave!" mike said, trying to catch his breath.
"what? whos comeing? who?" keara asked, looking worried.
"the army, the bounty hunters, the whole figgin military! u have to get out of there!"mike answered, sounding more and more nervouse.
"what? were are u? were are they?" keara said, gesturing to hersha to sit down for she had stoped eating and had begon to walk over to him.
the it happened. sora screamed, seeing the massive black mob moving towards the house. toro stood up, tightening his fistes. hersha ran upstairs and grabed her sward, readying herself for the future battle.
"there hear" keara said, hanging up the phone. and looking to sora as for what to do.
she looked back at him and said, "we run". he nodded his head.
the four of them bulted out the back door only to see another black mob coming. they were surounded. hersha looked to the sky. giant airships filed ythe sky. they were cot. there was nothing they could do. a tear ran down her face. she new she was going to breath her last breath soon. keara reached for her hand, and she took it.
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ch.23
the masive armys came. Suddenly, the first group of them lanched themselves onto hersha and keara.
"let me go!" hersha screamed, stugerling to get free.
"don't touch her!" keara yelled, trying to fight his way over to her.
"let them take u." sora said, hand cuffes already on her. she stood, not stuggling, while only a man held her arm. it was to late. one of the army personals had taken a swing at keara. hersha screamed. keara stagered a little, and then tried to fight back, looking as pittiful as ever.
"unhand them," toro said, walking over to the captin. it seemed that they did not want to 'capture' toro thought.
"u'r majesty, we have stricked orders from the queen to capture all personal that have added in u'r kidnaping. we are just following orders. now if u would come with me..." the man turned around and toro swong him back.
"now u listen to me. i'm giving new orders! let both the ganmalies and the human go. now!" toro demanded, looking very sturn.
"i'm sorry sir, the queens orders are law. we would normaly follow u'r bidding but the queen comes first." and with that to very big men came and 'escorted' toro to a landing airship. sora walked behing him, in a very dignafied fashion, still handcuffed. behind her was the mess of keara and hersha who were still fighting to get away and still getting bullied from unrully army solders.
once toro entered the ship, he ran to the bridge. he grabed a reciver and began to call his mother. she answered.
"so u found him?"
"mother, listen to me! order the military to release all persons that are related to my....my ah....capture.and fast!"
"oh toro! my toro! u'r safe! oh my baby! how are u? are u hurt? did they hurt u?" the queen said, obviously relived that her only child was ok.
"mother! release all the people! now!"toro continued to demand.
"i will not! what ever u want me to do will have to wait till u get home" she said, obviously having experience with dealing with toros demands. toro grumbled to himself. he new that no matter what he said, he would have to wait till they got back. and even that wouldn't help. he had to think of a plan to get out of the castle, and save his companiones.
sora was walked to a small, lit room. it comtained a bed, a bathroom, and a desk with a chair. she walked in and sat down as the gards who led her there locked the door from the outside. she sighed. there was no way she was going to win the trial ahead of her. then she remembered something. she began to cry. at least she would get a trial.
Keara and hersha were still fighting and screaming as they were led down a large, smelly hall. cells were on either side of them. a woman opened one and the solders threw hersha in. keara yelled again and another blow was felt. he was then also thrown into a cell beside hersha. they could both hear the sound of keys and the clanking of locked cells. hersha lay there, very still, breathing hard and crying. trears were streaming down her face. keara sat against a wall, hiding his head as silent tears fell and hit the floor. then a bag landed into his cell.
"undress and put all of u'r bellonging in there. u'r new clothes are on the floor. in the other cell, hersha obayed, undressing and putting on the black pants and a no-sleeve shirt. the clothes were to big. she then unwound the tape around her arm, revealing a tattoo made up of numbers and letters. she then put all of her stuff into the draw bag and threw it against the cell door. a woman picked it up and carred it away. keara had done the same. he went back to the wall and began to stair blankly at the next. hersha fell to the floor again, silently sobing.
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ch.24
"...and to our top story with kelly Moore"
"today, just a few minutes ago, the prince was resuced from a reseistance group outside of the capital. it seems he was being held against his will, for ransome.there were 2 ganmalies, hesha Hegorashie, number 4F5692LO9, and Keara Boyd, number 5L1638GA2, involved with the insident. number 4F5692LO9 had already comited many crimes, gaining a reward of over $5 million for who every captured her. the other, number 5L1638GA2 was a airship worker that ran his own bussness for other outlaw ganmalie. they will both be hung for treason in 3 days. there was also a human woman involved with the incident but no name has been givin to us. more on this story at 6."
the tv contined on as a well built ganmalie man sat staring at it. he was wearing blue coverall that were filthy with grease. his long black hair was pulled into a pony tail at the back of his head, while two long strans hung down in the front. he had to big black ears at either side of his head, pointing downward. he's face was still sticken with many emotions when a hand was placed on his shoulder making him jump.
"it's going to be ok, alex, the captine will think of something." said the male ganmalie, covered in bluish scales behind him. alex looked at him and then to his folded hands. he was desperate. he needed to do something to help.
(NOTE: for the last few chapters, and the next few, u might want to listen to the song "you'r crashing, but you'r no wave" by Fall out boy, on there new CD. the song ilistrates mu